I am here for you
I am still here
Why can’t they see me.
Crying, engulfed by fear.
Why can’t they hear me.
My mortal feels like a rime.
No pain. No emotion.
Frozen in time.
With scattering thoughts.
Then I saw her reflection.
Made by my dripping claret.
I was scared by her intention.
When she reached out to me.
“Don’t worry my love.
You are not alone.
Come with me. Let’s hove.
I am here for you.” Grim ‘Death‘ Reaper said
~16-Jun-2016~
July 16, 2016 at 7:05 am
aha!
lovely words!
n beautiful pic!
hey neighbor! : )
good day
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July 16, 2016 at 7:20 am
oh.. you made me surprised.. was it the words of grim reaper..
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July 16, 2016 at 7:20 am
Thanks Stranger.. π Same there too.. π
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July 16, 2016 at 7:22 am
Last stanza “lines” was by her.. π
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July 16, 2016 at 7:25 am
hm..so there is point to my surprise..
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July 16, 2016 at 7:27 am
Haha. Grim Reaper “death” is always depicted as scary thing taking away people. I thought may be, she is here for another reason. π
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July 16, 2016 at 7:40 am
so aren’t you aware of the reason..?
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July 16, 2016 at 7:55 am
You know my reason. π
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July 16, 2016 at 8:31 am
I loved this , specially the end !
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July 16, 2016 at 8:33 am
Thanks π Glad that you liked it. π
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July 16, 2016 at 8:34 am
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July 16, 2016 at 9:11 am
I liked the suspense and the way the poem flowed. Very well written!
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July 16, 2016 at 10:46 am
Thank you.. Thanks for the comment. π
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July 16, 2016 at 11:36 am
You are welcome π
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July 16, 2016 at 12:42 pm
π
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July 17, 2016 at 4:58 am
Please come read and follow my blog ty
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July 17, 2016 at 4:33 pm
Woww !! All the time I was like what next ?? And congratulations for the beautiful ending .. “I am here for you ” wow just wow
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July 17, 2016 at 4:50 pm
Thank you.. π Just that I wanted to write about death for a long time with different ending. Glad that it turned out well and you liked it. π Thanks for yur comment π
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July 17, 2016 at 5:02 pm
My pleasure π
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July 17, 2016 at 5:05 pm
I loved the pics of Meghalaya you posted in WP.. π
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July 17, 2016 at 6:11 pm
Thank you so much π
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July 17, 2016 at 6:25 pm
π
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July 20, 2016 at 5:32 pm
Hate being repetitive but I absolutely love the last lines! π
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July 20, 2016 at 5:34 pm
No worries. I hate only when it is hated but not when it is loved repeatedly.. π
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July 27, 2016 at 12:58 pm
Really nice and beautiful words to portray one’s predicament. Nice blog, loved to go through it. Followed you, check my blog if u wish to follow.
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July 27, 2016 at 4:09 pm
Sure. Thanks for visiting my blog. π
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July 28, 2016 at 5:18 am
π keep writing good deeds, i will keep visiting.
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July 28, 2016 at 4:25 pm
Yu too π
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July 29, 2016 at 11:45 am
Dripping claret…it’s beautiful
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July 29, 2016 at 12:27 pm
Thanks π
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July 30, 2016 at 6:29 am
Loved it !!!!
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July 30, 2016 at 8:40 am
Thanks. Welcome to my blog. π
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July 30, 2016 at 9:01 am
I have been here several times. Lol lame Tyler π
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July 30, 2016 at 9:54 am
Hahhahaha. I know. But I can still welcome you.. π
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August 13, 2016 at 10:21 am
Always love your writing β₯
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August 13, 2016 at 10:55 am
Thank you π
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August 20, 2016 at 7:45 am
This is awesome.. ! π
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August 20, 2016 at 10:26 am
Thanks Rashmi :’)
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August 25, 2016 at 5:36 am
wow!! so nice a poem..i feel kilig!
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August 25, 2016 at 10:00 am
Thanks for your comment π
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September 1, 2016 at 4:50 pm
Death should not be depicated scary always ,it take us back to our “home “.Its really amazing the way you have shown it here differently .
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September 1, 2016 at 4:55 pm
Thanks :).. Yea.. Only if Mankind could understand this. We could progress better as a species. :’)
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September 27, 2016 at 5:29 am
Pretty nice post
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September 27, 2016 at 3:59 pm
Thanks Adam π
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October 18, 2016 at 11:22 am
I do understand that some person has come to take him.
But who is that person and what is this all about ?
Please do explain for my benefit.
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October 18, 2016 at 3:13 pm
Cattie.. Death is the entity coming for him. The idea behind this post is that. Humans have always feared death. May be she is here, only to help those people who are dead (lost and scared ) :’)
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October 19, 2016 at 4:33 am
Please don’t get sad with Death. Just concentrate on The PRESENT LIVING LIFE.
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October 19, 2016 at 8:03 am
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