I am here for you

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Death

I am still here
Why can’t they see me.
Crying, engulfed by fear.
Why can’t they hear me.

My mortal feels like a rime.
No pain. No emotion.
Frozen in time.
With scattering thoughts.

Then I saw her reflection.
Made by my dripping claret.
I was scared by her intention.
When she reached out to me.

“Don’t worry my love.
You are not alone.
Come with me. Let’s hove.
I am here for you.”   Grim ‘Death‘ Reaper said

~16-Jun-2016~

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49 thoughts on “I am here for you

    Isolated_girl said:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:05 am

    aha!

    lovely words!
    n beautiful pic!

    hey neighbor! : )

    good day

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    Akhila said:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:20 am

    oh.. you made me surprised.. was it the words of grim reaper..

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:20 am

    Thanks Stranger.. πŸ˜€ Same there too.. πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:22 am

    Last stanza “lines” was by her.. πŸ™‚

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    Akhila said:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:25 am

    hm..so there is point to my surprise..

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:27 am

    Haha. Grim Reaper “death” is always depicted as scary thing taking away people. I thought may be, she is here for another reason. πŸ™‚

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    Akhila said:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:40 am

    so aren’t you aware of the reason..?

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 16, 2016 at 7:55 am

    You know my reason. πŸ™‚

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    shreyakhetan said:
    July 16, 2016 at 8:31 am

    I loved this , specially the end !

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 16, 2016 at 8:33 am

    Thanks πŸ™‚ Glad that you liked it. πŸ™‚

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    shreyakhetan said:
    July 16, 2016 at 8:34 am

    ( :

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    Hargun Wahi said:
    July 16, 2016 at 9:11 am

    I liked the suspense and the way the poem flowed. Very well written!
    πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 16, 2016 at 10:46 am

    Thank you.. Thanks for the comment. πŸ™‚

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    Hargun Wahi said:
    July 16, 2016 at 11:36 am

    You are welcome πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 16, 2016 at 12:42 pm

    πŸ™‚

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    addictchik said:
    July 17, 2016 at 4:58 am

    Please come read and follow my blog ty

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    bhaatdal said:
    July 17, 2016 at 4:33 pm

    Woww !! All the time I was like what next ?? And congratulations for the beautiful ending .. “I am here for you ” wow just wow

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 17, 2016 at 4:50 pm

    Thank you.. πŸ™‚ Just that I wanted to write about death for a long time with different ending. Glad that it turned out well and you liked it. πŸ™‚ Thanks for yur comment πŸ™‚

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    bhaatdal said:
    July 17, 2016 at 5:02 pm

    My pleasure πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 17, 2016 at 5:05 pm

    I loved the pics of Meghalaya you posted in WP.. πŸ™‚

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    bhaatdal said:
    July 17, 2016 at 6:11 pm

    Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 17, 2016 at 6:25 pm

    πŸ™‚

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    ZenLikeFuck said:
    July 20, 2016 at 5:32 pm

    Hate being repetitive but I absolutely love the last lines! πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 20, 2016 at 5:34 pm

    No worries. I hate only when it is hated but not when it is loved repeatedly.. πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 24, 2016 at 12:47 pm

    Yes. I have.. Started following the blog. πŸ™‚

    Like

    IndiaBlog said:
    July 27, 2016 at 12:58 pm

    Really nice and beautiful words to portray one’s predicament. Nice blog, loved to go through it. Followed you, check my blog if u wish to follow.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 27, 2016 at 4:09 pm

    Sure. Thanks for visiting my blog. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    IndiaBlog said:
    July 28, 2016 at 5:18 am

    πŸ™‚ keep writing good deeds, i will keep visiting.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 28, 2016 at 4:25 pm

    Yu too πŸ™‚

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    fairytaleofasimplegirl said:
    July 29, 2016 at 11:45 am

    Dripping claret…it’s beautiful

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 29, 2016 at 12:27 pm

    Thanks πŸ™‚

    Like

    Pratyusha said:
    July 30, 2016 at 6:29 am

    Loved it !!!!

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 30, 2016 at 8:40 am

    Thanks. Welcome to my blog. πŸ™‚

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    Pratyusha said:
    July 30, 2016 at 9:01 am

    I have been here several times. Lol lame Tyler πŸ˜‰

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 30, 2016 at 9:54 am

    Hahhahaha. I know. But I can still welcome you.. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    Happy Rabbit Travels said:
    August 13, 2016 at 10:21 am

    Always love your writing β™₯

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    August 13, 2016 at 10:55 am

    Thank you πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    Rashmi Tiwari said:
    August 20, 2016 at 7:45 am

    This is awesome.. ! 😍

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    August 20, 2016 at 10:26 am

    Thanks Rashmi :’)

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    happysunsetcom said:
    August 25, 2016 at 5:36 am

    wow!! so nice a poem..i feel kilig!

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    August 25, 2016 at 10:00 am

    Thanks for your comment πŸ˜€

    Like

    unsaid words said:
    September 1, 2016 at 4:50 pm

    Death should not be depicated scary always ,it take us back to our “home “.Its really amazing the way you have shown it here differently .

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    September 1, 2016 at 4:55 pm

    Thanks :).. Yea.. Only if Mankind could understand this. We could progress better as a species. :’)

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    Adam Hanif said:
    September 27, 2016 at 5:29 am

    Pretty nice post

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    September 27, 2016 at 3:59 pm

    Thanks Adam πŸ™‚

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    Cattie's World said:
    October 18, 2016 at 11:22 am

    I do understand that some person has come to take him.
    But who is that person and what is this all about ?
    Please do explain for my benefit.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    October 18, 2016 at 3:13 pm

    Cattie.. Death is the entity coming for him. The idea behind this post is that. Humans have always feared death. May be she is here, only to help those people who are dead (lost and scared ) :’)

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    Cattie's World said:
    October 19, 2016 at 4:33 am

    Please don’t get sad with Death. Just concentrate on The PRESENT LIVING LIFE.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    October 19, 2016 at 8:03 am

    πŸ™‚

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