The Crab Constellation.
Connecting those invisible dots
Dimmest zodiac among the rest
Claws reaching through infinite space
With beehive clustered in the chest
Now, a part of the cluster is in me
Spreading and growing in size.
Conferring with white ghosts.
My lifespan – a number in rolling dice.
~23-Apr-2016~
April 23, 2016 at 6:21 am
beautiful words. the parallelism of outsides and insides was really good. π
PS β I bungled migration to new blog domain. The old one is ruined too. So please follow my blog here -sharingtidbits.wordpress.com/ (or cby licking my pic) thanks:)
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April 23, 2016 at 6:51 am
Thanks Nitin. π Btw, sure I will hit the follow button.
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April 23, 2016 at 11:26 am
Beehive clustered in the chest. That’s simply brilliant! I was awe struck when I read that and looked into the picture to find an actual hive! Lovely post !
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April 23, 2016 at 12:33 pm
Thank you π Glad that I was able to help reach your milestone and being awestruck on the same day. :’) I did have the same feeling when I looked up the Constellation.
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April 23, 2016 at 3:51 pm
thanks a lot. I really appreciate. π
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April 24, 2016 at 2:11 am
Always loving your words π
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April 24, 2016 at 3:23 am
Thanks π
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April 24, 2016 at 9:20 am
Loved every word of it!
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April 24, 2016 at 11:56 am
Happy to see your comment. π
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April 25, 2016 at 8:23 am
That was well observed and weaved into words π
I loved the last line π
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April 25, 2016 at 11:43 am
Thanks π Glad that you liked it and you were able to relate to it. π
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April 25, 2016 at 1:41 pm
You are welcome π
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April 25, 2016 at 4:06 pm
π
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April 27, 2016 at 11:39 am
Awesome…………..superb
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April 27, 2016 at 4:15 pm
Thanks Anagha π
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May 5, 2016 at 9:27 am
Hi, Fab blog! I have just set up mine, but still in the very early stages β a few months old. Just making efforts to link in with fellow bloggers to improve our followers and get the word out there for us both. I would appreciate you having a peek at my blog, as I have published several posts. Feel free to like, comment, follow or just take a peek. Thank you π
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May 10, 2016 at 7:28 am
Reblogged this on Jazz lily and commented:
Wonderful! Love it!
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May 10, 2016 at 7:28 am
https://jazzlilyblog.wordpress.com/2016/05/10/liebster-award/
Congrats!! Check out the link!
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May 10, 2016 at 3:11 pm
Thanks. Sure will check out.. π
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May 16, 2016 at 10:16 am
I have started to follow your blog. Thanks for visiting my blog π
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May 16, 2016 at 5:42 pm
Thank you kindly too! Enjoy blogging π
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May 17, 2016 at 7:16 am
Nice imagery … loved how you’ve finally put it all together. π
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May 17, 2016 at 10:39 am
Thanks Katz. Glad that you liked it. π
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May 17, 2016 at 10:43 am
Pleasure π
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May 17, 2016 at 12:56 pm
π
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May 18, 2016 at 3:24 pm
aha!
fierce n wonderful
very deep! like staring to the dark sky!
and getting lost
wondering
about the numerous glittery objects
cheers
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May 18, 2016 at 3:32 pm
Thanks for the comment. Glad that you liked it. π
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August 11, 2016 at 8:08 am
Choice of words are exceptionally good ππamazing
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August 11, 2016 at 8:26 am
:’) Thanks for visiting my blog. π
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