The Crab Constellation.

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Connecting those invisible dots
Dimmest zodiac among the rest
Claws reaching through infinite space
With beehive clustered in the chest

Now, a part of the cluster is in me
Spreading and growing in size.
Conferring with white ghosts.
My lifespan – a number in rolling dice.

~23-Apr-2016~

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29 thoughts on “The Crab Constellation.

    Nitin said:
    April 23, 2016 at 6:21 am

    beautiful words. the parallelism of outsides and insides was really good. πŸ™‚

    PS – I bungled migration to new blog domain. The old one is ruined too. So please follow my blog here -sharingtidbits.wordpress.com/ (or cby licking my pic) thanks:)

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 23, 2016 at 6:51 am

    Thanks Nitin. πŸ™‚ Btw, sure I will hit the follow button.

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    zenlikefuck said:
    April 23, 2016 at 11:26 am

    Beehive clustered in the chest. That’s simply brilliant! I was awe struck when I read that and looked into the picture to find an actual hive! Lovely post !

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 23, 2016 at 12:33 pm

    Thank you πŸ™‚ Glad that I was able to help reach your milestone and being awestruck on the same day. :’) I did have the same feeling when I looked up the Constellation.

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    Nitin said:
    April 23, 2016 at 3:51 pm

    thanks a lot. I really appreciate. πŸ™‚

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    Happy Rabbit Travels said:
    April 24, 2016 at 2:11 am

    Always loving your words πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 24, 2016 at 3:23 am

    Thanks πŸ™‚

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    Ishita Lakra said:
    April 24, 2016 at 9:20 am

    Loved every word of it!

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 24, 2016 at 11:56 am

    Happy to see your comment. πŸ™‚

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    Hargun Wahi said:
    April 25, 2016 at 8:23 am

    That was well observed and weaved into words πŸ™‚
    I loved the last line πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 25, 2016 at 11:43 am

    Thanks πŸ™‚ Glad that you liked it and you were able to relate to it. πŸ™‚

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    Hargun Wahi said:
    April 25, 2016 at 1:41 pm

    You are welcome πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 25, 2016 at 4:06 pm

    πŸ™‚

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    anaghamurali said:
    April 27, 2016 at 11:39 am

    Awesome…………..superb

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 27, 2016 at 4:15 pm

    Thanks Anagha πŸ™‚

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    forkwardthinkingfoodinista said:
    May 5, 2016 at 9:27 am

    Hi, Fab blog! I have just set up mine, but still in the very early stages – a few months old. Just making efforts to link in with fellow bloggers to improve our followers and get the word out there for us both. I would appreciate you having a peek at my blog, as I have published several posts. Feel free to like, comment, follow or just take a peek. Thank you πŸ™‚

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    Sahana said:
    May 10, 2016 at 7:28 am

    Reblogged this on Jazz lily and commented:
    Wonderful! Love it!

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    Sahana said:
    May 10, 2016 at 7:28 am
    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    May 10, 2016 at 3:11 pm

    Thanks. Sure will check out.. πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    May 16, 2016 at 10:16 am

    I have started to follow your blog. Thanks for visiting my blog πŸ™‚

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    forkwardthinkingfoodinista said:
    May 16, 2016 at 5:42 pm

    Thank you kindly too! Enjoy blogging πŸ™‚

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    kratzworld said:
    May 17, 2016 at 7:16 am

    Nice imagery … loved how you’ve finally put it all together. πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    May 17, 2016 at 10:39 am

    Thanks Katz. Glad that you liked it. πŸ™‚

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    kratzworld said:
    May 17, 2016 at 10:43 am

    Pleasure πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    May 17, 2016 at 12:56 pm

    πŸ™‚

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    Isolated_girl said:
    May 18, 2016 at 3:24 pm

    aha!

    fierce n wonderful

    very deep! like staring to the dark sky!
    and getting lost
    wondering
    about the numerous glittery objects

    cheers

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    May 18, 2016 at 3:32 pm

    Thanks for the comment. Glad that you liked it. πŸ™‚

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    musinggirl said:
    August 11, 2016 at 8:08 am

    Choice of words are exceptionally good πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œamazing

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    August 11, 2016 at 8:26 am

    :’) Thanks for visiting my blog. πŸ™‚

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