Autumn

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When the sky becomes dark and gray.
Air is filled with sorrow and grave.
Feeling dead is what conveyed by autumn.
When leaves fall endlessly into the bottom.

Taunted by silence and haunted by fears.
The whole world comes down with tears.
Blackened sky,frozen land and drizzling rain.
Tell endless stories of bleeding heart and raging pain.

~01/Jun/2015~

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23 thoughts on “Autumn

    Isolated_girl said:
    March 6, 2016 at 5:59 am

    Loved it :))

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    March 6, 2016 at 6:03 am

    Thanks for the comment. Isolated_girl πŸ™‚

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    Isolated_girl said:
    March 6, 2016 at 7:53 am

    My pleasure :p

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    March 6, 2016 at 7:58 am

    πŸ™‚

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    myprettylittlestethoscope said:
    March 7, 2016 at 4:05 am

    This is good! I like the picture as well, the bird needs a friend.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    March 7, 2016 at 9:09 am

    Thanks πŸ™‚ Yeah.. Eventhough he has a beautiful view but no one to share the moment. πŸ™‚

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    jojo said:
    March 9, 2016 at 11:02 am

    Hiding under seasons, huh? I think it’s not autumn brings these thoughts. Still its very beautiful!

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    March 9, 2016 at 4:20 pm

    May be it was the season.. or the soulless tree or the lonely bird or the moment. I leave it to the people to interpret the words in their own way πŸ™‚

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    anaghamurali said:
    April 4, 2016 at 3:17 pm

    there was something deep….in this poem lovely

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 4, 2016 at 5:19 pm

    Glad you were able to relate to it. So what do you think about autumn πŸ™‚

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    anaghamurali said:
    April 5, 2016 at 1:39 pm

    I feel autumn is silence….

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 5, 2016 at 3:40 pm

    πŸ™‚

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    Abhijit said:
    April 9, 2016 at 1:03 pm

    Beautifully written…πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    April 9, 2016 at 1:17 pm

    Thanks for the comment. Abhijit πŸ™‚

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    mehumm said:
    October 16, 2016 at 3:37 am

    So nicely done! Love that line! 😁

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    mehumm said:
    October 16, 2016 at 3:38 am

    *last line

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    October 16, 2016 at 3:43 am

    Glad that you liked mine. Your post ended with a good note too.. Like you still haven’t got your strength and sometimes it is better to let things go.. :’)

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    shreyakhetan said:
    February 13, 2017 at 5:30 am

    I am Jack’s broken heart !!!!???
    By the way , beautiful poem loved the way you ended it !!

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 13, 2017 at 3:52 pm

    Hahaha. Thank you.. :’)
    I am Jack’s deflated happiness. How are you. Jill..?

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    shreyakhetan said:
    February 13, 2017 at 4:04 pm

    I am Jill ‘ s wasted life perhaps lol

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 13, 2017 at 4:09 pm

    Haha. You are young to feel that way. I am Jack’s overwhelming sense of confidence. πŸ™‚

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    shreyakhetan said:
    February 14, 2017 at 4:15 am

    From deflated happiness to overwhelming sense of confidence? Well , that escalated quickly xD

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 14, 2017 at 7:10 am

    Haha. Confidence, opinions and advises over flows, when it comes to other’s life. Ron Burgundy approves this mesage :p

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