Here I am..

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Here I am, lying naked,
Taking in all the pain.

Staring at the window,
Tears rolling down the pane.
It’s dark and cold,
Drowning myself in bane.
I wish you were here,
Your warmth makes sane.

Here I am, craving for your love.
As I think about the rain.

~13/Nov/2015~

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35 thoughts on “Here I am..”

    thelonelyauthorblog said:
    November 13, 2015 at 4:34 pm

    Loved this piece.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 13, 2015 at 4:46 pm

    Thanks. πŸ™‚ Glad that you liked it πŸ˜€

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    Pratyusha said:
    November 14, 2015 at 8:12 am

    Very well written πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 14, 2015 at 8:33 am

    Thanks Pratyusha πŸ™‚

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    Pratyusha said:
    November 14, 2015 at 9:22 am

    You are welcome. πŸ™‚

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    R 'I' P said:
    November 15, 2015 at 3:49 pm

    Great display of emotions! Loved it

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 15, 2015 at 4:41 pm

    Thanks.. Glad that you liked it.. Thanks for visiting my blog. πŸ™‚

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    R 'I' P said:
    November 15, 2015 at 4:42 pm

    You’re welcome πŸ™‚

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    Đreàm said:
    November 17, 2015 at 6:23 pm

    Reblogged this on astory.

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    Đreàm said:
    November 17, 2015 at 6:24 pm

    Really nice!

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 18, 2015 at 1:59 am

    Thanks. Glad that you liked and reblogged my post. πŸ™‚

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    AKIRAA said:
    November 18, 2015 at 9:21 am

    Beautiful this is.. well I just learned that I have missed a lot of amazing stuff from you.. but I’ll try to catch up!

    Keep Smiling! πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 18, 2015 at 3:41 pm

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    AKIRAA said:
    November 18, 2015 at 3:46 pm

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 18, 2015 at 3:55 pm

    Haha. My WP site is happy now. Thanks πŸ™‚

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    AKIRAA said:
    November 19, 2015 at 10:11 am

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    izza ifzaal said:
    December 17, 2015 at 6:35 pm

    This is riveting πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    December 18, 2015 at 2:30 am

    Glad that you visited my blog. Thanks Izza for the comment. πŸ™‚

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    Noor's Wings said:
    January 1, 2016 at 12:18 pm

    I think … This

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    January 1, 2016 at 12:46 pm

    I am happy that you were able to relate to my post. Thanks for commenting πŸ™‚

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    Noor's Wings said:
    January 1, 2016 at 12:48 pm

    😳😳😳😳I love it

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    January 1, 2016 at 1:03 pm

    Elated.. Special response by the post.. “Here I am, craving for your like/comment. πŸ˜€ :)”

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    Noor's Wings said:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:20 pm

    πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:24 pm

    Thanks for visiting my blog. πŸ™‚

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    Noor's Wings said:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:24 pm

    Welcome dear ^~^

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:26 pm

    πŸ™‚

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    Noor's Wings said:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:26 pm

    hahah ^~^

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    Noor's Wings said:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:28 pm

    Check out his works I will be so happy . If he can get likes^~^ because I love … Make happy to him haha

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:32 pm

    Haha. Sure will check.. πŸ™‚

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    Noor's Wings said:
    January 1, 2016 at 2:52 pm

    πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    January 1, 2016 at 3:26 pm

    Hahaha. I am not sure what I am drawn into but will check the posts..

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    shreyakhetan said:
    February 20, 2016 at 5:34 pm

    Such deep emotions, I don’t want to leave.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 20, 2016 at 5:34 pm

    Wow. Thanks Shreya.. πŸ™‚

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    shreyakhetan said:
    February 20, 2016 at 5:48 pm

    Lol , or maybe you can read it like a lazy person who dozed off without turning on the fans or ac on a hot humid morning πŸ˜›

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 20, 2016 at 5:52 pm

    Hahha. Works well with the post. πŸ™‚ Impressive. But I stand with a rainy night. πŸ˜‰

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