A Promise..
Alone in this unknown world.
Your first embrace made me cry.
‘Destiny’, you whispered in my ear.
and a promise to be with me
until my last breath.
Days.. Months.. Years passed by.
We spent our time together.
‘Slowly and steady’
You were burning me from the inside.
blamed the butterflies in my stomach
As darkness prowl upon me.
One last time, I take you in.
‘Don’t leave me alone’ I cried.
‘I won’t,Β untilΒ your last breath’ she replied
As I close my eyes and fall into an endless sea.
~ A love story between humans and air (oxygen)Β ~31/Oct/2015~
November 1, 2015 at 11:49 am
This is remarkable
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November 1, 2015 at 12:49 pm
Thanks Izza. Glad that you liked my post. π I hope that one day I will write something with great depth which I always find in your post.. Love your work π
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November 1, 2015 at 1:05 pm
You write wonderfully Tyler seriously . ..I am just always full of drama lol..
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November 1, 2015 at 1:32 pm
Hahaha. You are talking with Ramesh. Ramesh does the monotonous work like maintianing the blog, working and so on. Tyler goes beyond that like day dreaming, abstract thoughts… And I will inform Tyler when he wakes up. π :p
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November 8, 2015 at 3:05 pm
Just amazing .. Was curious at the very first moment that what’s the main plot ?? And all my curiosity ends up with the last line.
Jus amazing & true. π
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November 8, 2015 at 3:10 pm
Thanks π Glad that my post kept the curiosity factor high until the end. :D. Yes. We.. humans take her for granted.. π₯
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November 8, 2015 at 6:09 pm
Yeah.. #universal truth .. π
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November 11, 2015 at 5:40 pm
#word. Never thought of air this way. Wow
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November 11, 2015 at 5:48 pm
Thank you π
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November 11, 2015 at 5:55 pm
Lol your welcome. Definitely goons follow your blog. I like your work and the fact your down to earth.
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November 11, 2015 at 5:55 pm
Gonna*
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November 11, 2015 at 6:18 pm
For a second I was wondering why goons would follow my blog. π Wow. Thanks. I am flying in the sky.
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November 11, 2015 at 6:25 pm
Lwkmd ππ’π’ππππππππ.Stupid autocorrect lol. Your welcome. Thank you very much also βΊοΈ
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December 20, 2015 at 1:28 pm
Loved your anology π its beautiful.
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December 20, 2015 at 1:36 pm
Thanks Shreya π
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February 14, 2016 at 3:07 am
Woww!! I love the way you compared!! β€
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February 14, 2016 at 4:01 am
Thanks and glad that you liked it. Don’t you think it is a tragic love story happening each day around us. π
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February 14, 2016 at 6:21 am
So true my dear soo true!! π
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February 14, 2016 at 6:38 am
π
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February 20, 2016 at 7:29 am
this is really awesome..! π
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February 20, 2016 at 7:45 am
Thanks Teena. We are under her/his spell and no way to escape till the end. :’)
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February 20, 2016 at 7:46 am
π
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July 30, 2016 at 10:51 am
Woah!! This one’s an amazing piece , a perfect blend of words with emotionsπ
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July 30, 2016 at 1:47 pm
Thanks Prerna π Thanks for your comment π
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July 30, 2016 at 1:47 pm
Most welcome..
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July 30, 2016 at 1:49 pm
π
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January 14, 2018 at 4:49 pm
Thanks.. Akanksha.. π
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January 14, 2018 at 9:57 pm
Good concept⦠Beautiful and meaningful..
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