A Promise..

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Alone in this unknown world.
Your first embrace made me cry.
‘Destiny’, you whispered in my ear.
and a promise to be with me
until my last breath.

Days.. Months.. Years passed by.
We spent our time together.
‘Slowly and steady’
You were burning me from the inside.
blamed the butterflies in my stomach

As darkness prowl upon me.
One last time, I take you in.
‘Don’t leave me alone’ I cried.
‘I won’t,Β untilΒ your last breath’ she replied
As I close my eyes and fall into an endless sea.

~ A love story between humans and air (oxygen)Β ~31/Oct/2015~

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26 thoughts on “A Promise..

    izza ifzaal said:
    November 1, 2015 at 11:49 am

    This is remarkable

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 1, 2015 at 12:49 pm

    Thanks Izza. Glad that you liked my post. πŸ™‚ I hope that one day I will write something with great depth which I always find in your post.. Love your work πŸ™‚

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    izza ifzaal said:
    November 1, 2015 at 1:05 pm

    You write wonderfully Tyler seriously . ..I am just always full of drama lol..

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 1, 2015 at 1:32 pm

    Hahaha. You are talking with Ramesh. Ramesh does the monotonous work like maintianing the blog, working and so on. Tyler goes beyond that like day dreaming, abstract thoughts… And I will inform Tyler when he wakes up. πŸ˜‰ :p

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    thoughts that stucked said:
    November 8, 2015 at 3:05 pm

    Just amazing .. Was curious at the very first moment that what’s the main plot ?? And all my curiosity ends up with the last line.
    Jus amazing & true. πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 8, 2015 at 3:10 pm

    Thanks πŸ™‚ Glad that my post kept the curiosity factor high until the end. :D. Yes. We.. humans take her for granted.. πŸ˜₯

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    thoughts that stucked said:
    November 8, 2015 at 6:09 pm

    Yeah.. #universal truth .. πŸ˜€

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    sunesiss said:
    November 11, 2015 at 5:40 pm

    #word. Never thought of air this way. Wow

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 11, 2015 at 5:48 pm

    Thank you πŸ™‚

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    sunesiss said:
    November 11, 2015 at 5:55 pm

    Lol your welcome. Definitely goons follow your blog. I like your work and the fact your down to earth.

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    sunesiss said:
    November 11, 2015 at 5:55 pm

    Gonna*

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    November 11, 2015 at 6:18 pm

    For a second I was wondering why goons would follow my blog. πŸ™‚ Wow. Thanks. I am flying in the sky.

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    sunesiss said:
    November 11, 2015 at 6:25 pm

    Lwkmd πŸ˜­πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜€πŸ˜„πŸ˜Š.Stupid autocorrect lol. Your welcome. Thank you very much also ☺️

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    shreyakhetan said:
    December 20, 2015 at 1:28 pm

    Loved your anology πŸ™‚ its beautiful.

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    December 20, 2015 at 1:36 pm

    Thanks Shreya πŸ™‚

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    IshmaImroz said:
    February 14, 2016 at 3:07 am

    Woww!! I love the way you compared!! ❀

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 14, 2016 at 4:01 am

    Thanks and glad that you liked it. Don’t you think it is a tragic love story happening each day around us. πŸ™‚

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    IshmaImroz said:
    February 14, 2016 at 6:21 am

    So true my dear soo true!! πŸ˜‰

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 14, 2016 at 6:38 am

    πŸ™‚

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    Teena Thomas said:
    February 20, 2016 at 7:29 am

    this is really awesome..! πŸ™‚

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    February 20, 2016 at 7:45 am

    Thanks Teena. We are under her/his spell and no way to escape till the end. :’)

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    Teena Thomas said:
    February 20, 2016 at 7:46 am

    πŸ˜€

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    Prerna said:
    July 30, 2016 at 10:51 am

    Woah!! This one’s an amazing piece , a perfect blend of words with emotionsπŸ‘

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 30, 2016 at 1:47 pm

    Thanks Prerna πŸ™‚ Thanks for your comment πŸ™‚

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    Prerna said:
    July 30, 2016 at 1:47 pm

    Most welcome..

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    TylerLearnsToWrite responded:
    July 30, 2016 at 1:49 pm

    πŸ™‚

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